Comments for The Lancashire Writing Hub http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk Bringing the literary community together Thu, 02 Feb 2012 23:03:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 Comment on Autumn by Penwortham67 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/02/autumn/comment-page-1/#comment-61620 Penwortham67 Sun, 05 Feb 2012 09:22:12 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3655#comment-61620 Thankyou Tom Thankyou Tom

]]> Comment on Second Person Future Tense by Creatinghavoc http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/02/second-person-future-tense/comment-page-1/#comment-61501 Creatinghavoc Sat, 04 Feb 2012 16:16:32 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3620#comment-61501 Clever. I enjoyed reading this because by playing mind games you were actually, wittily making a point. Clever. I enjoyed reading this because by playing mind games you were actually, wittily making a point.

]]> Comment on Second Person Future Tense by Bill Lythgoe http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/02/second-person-future-tense/comment-page-1/#comment-61406 Bill Lythgoe Sat, 04 Feb 2012 10:36:15 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3620#comment-61406 Unable to reply to someone who is talking to himself. Unable to reply to someone who is talking to himself.

]]> Comment on Autumn by Tom Kilcourse http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/02/autumn/comment-page-1/#comment-61375 Tom Kilcourse Sat, 04 Feb 2012 08:56:01 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3655#comment-61375 Nice Nice

]]> Comment on Second Person Future Tense by Happyhamster http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/02/second-person-future-tense/comment-page-1/#comment-61141 Happyhamster Fri, 03 Feb 2012 14:14:46 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3620#comment-61141 Not sure if you've just reaffirmed my feeling that maybe I'll never amount to much. Or am I just that way out today? Tomorrow I may decide to prove you wrong Not sure if you’ve just reaffirmed my feeling that maybe I’ll never amount to much. Or am I just that way out today? Tomorrow I may decide to prove you wrong

]]> Comment on Second Person Future Tense by Tom Kilcourse http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/02/second-person-future-tense/comment-page-1/#comment-61103 Tom Kilcourse Fri, 03 Feb 2012 11:35:09 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3620#comment-61103 Hello, John. I take it this was written with teachers of creative writing in mind. Never having attended a course on writing I find it difficult to judge its pertinence. It does remind me of someone I knew who habitually played mind games. He provided me with much material for my writing. Hello, John. I take it this was written with teachers of creative writing in mind. Never having attended a course on writing I find it difficult to judge its pertinence. It does remind me of someone I knew who habitually played mind games. He provided me with much material for my writing.

]]> Comment on Second Person Future Tense by edgey http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/02/second-person-future-tense/comment-page-1/#comment-61090 edgey Fri, 03 Feb 2012 10:20:26 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3620#comment-61090 John that was like reading Agatha Christina's Belgian detective describe second person future tense.,but's that's the means to the story., ha VERY CLEVER John that was like reading Agatha Christina’s Belgian detective describe second person future tense.,but’s that’s the means to the story., ha VERY CLEVER

]]> Comment on Guest Editor – Kim Chamberlain by Pam Hewett http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/01/guest-editor-kim-chamberlain/comment-page-1/#comment-60988 Pam Hewett Thu, 02 Feb 2012 23:03:41 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3917#comment-60988 Congratulations Kim! Congratulations Kim!

]]> Comment on The Rear end of an Ass by John D Rutter http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/02/the-rear-end-of-an-ass/comment-page-1/#comment-60974 John D Rutter Thu, 02 Feb 2012 21:31:59 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3616#comment-60974 Hi Tom Poor sentence that. I was trying to decsribe a woman who makes a point of not wearing make-up as a fashion statement. Reading it now, it obviously needs a rewrite. Mrs Clegg will be upset. Hi Tom

Poor sentence that. I was trying to decsribe a woman who makes a point of not wearing make-up as a fashion statement. Reading it now, it obviously needs a rewrite. Mrs Clegg will be upset.

]]> Comment on Philip Burton – Too Young to Forget. Review by Norman Hadley. by Norman Hadley http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/2012/01/philip-burton-too-young-to-forget-review-by-norman-hadley/comment-page-1/#comment-60961 Norman Hadley Thu, 02 Feb 2012 20:11:54 +0000 http://www.lancashirewritinghub.co.uk/?p=3774#comment-60961 Consultation with the poet has expanded my vocabulary a smidgeon. A velitation is a skirmish. And the hinted Spoonerism was intended. Now you know. Consultation with the poet has expanded my vocabulary a smidgeon. A velitation is a skirmish. And the hinted Spoonerism was intended. Now you know.

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